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Naruto x Hinata- Look at me

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Since Neji and Tenten had recently started going out Hinata had see a
big diffirence in Neji's behavior. He smiled alot more and awlays had
kind eyes. Hinata was very happy for them both but she felt abit lonely;
Her family were abroad so it used to be just her and Neji.

Hinata sat outside sipping some tea she had just made when Neji opened
the gates. Before he closed them he gave Tenten a hug and gave her
a long kiss. Hinata blushed as she felt like she was intruding.
Neji closed the gates and turned to see Hinata, he had a huge smile on his
face, "Lady Hinata, how is your evening?"
"I'm fine, Thank you" Hinata said.
Neji came and sat by her,"I invited Tenten around for dinner i hope you
don't mind."
"o-oh no of cause not, that would be nice,"
"That's great," Neji's smile grew.
"Oh...um" Hinata interrupted.
"What is it?" Neji asked.
"W-we don't have much food in i better go out and get some."

Before Hinata closed the front gates she her Neji shout to her,
"You could invite Naruto!"
Hinata nearly fainted at the though of Naruto having dinner with her.
She tryed to calm herself down on the way to the shop, if she didn't see
him then she didn't have to ask him she thought to herself.
She quickly made her way around the shop and went to the till, she let out
a breath she didn't know she had been holding. She took her brown paper bag
and clutched it to her chest as she hurried out the shop. Just as she thought
she had got away with not seeing Naruto, she bumped into something or someone
hard. She fell back with a crash and her food went everywhere.
"Ow" She said as she opened her eye's to see Naruto standing in front of her.
"Hinata, sorry i didn't see you!" Naruto bent down to help her, he face went hot
at his touch.
"N-no it's my fault," she managed to say.
She began to pick her things up, if she stared at Naruto too long she would explode.
"Let me help you," Naruto said.
They both went to retrieve a potato at the same time and there hands touched. Hinata
pulled back and started babbling, "Ah er I'm sorry."
Naruto stood up and smiled as he handed her the potato, "Haha, no problem."
The adrenaline was still running through her from Naruto's touch.
"N-Naruto,"
"Yea,"
"W-would you like to come to my house for dinner." Hinata couldn't look
at him any more she braced herself for rejection but she wasn't sure she could
handle it.
"Really?" he said, "are you sure? i mean, Neji wouldn't mind, would he?"
Hinata couldn't believe he hadn't said no.
"H-he wouldn't he suggested it," She said.
"Okay then,"
"Thanks!" Hinata almost squealed.
"But one thing,"
"What is it?" Hinata began to get worried.
"I'll carry the shopping bag, it's the least i can do." Naruto said as he smiled
that AMAZING smile of his. He took the bag from her and began to walk towards the
Hyuga manchin. Hinata didn't follow she wondered if she was dreaming.
Naruto turned around when he relised Hinata wasn't following him, "you okay?"
"y-yes." Hinata said as she rushed up to walk next to him.

When Hinata opened the door to the Hyuga manchin Neji was already setting up the
table.
"You're back," Neji said looking up from the table, "Oh, Naruto nice to see you."
He walked over to shake Naruto's hand.
"Nice to see you too Neji," Naruto smiled.
"I-I'll go make dinner," Hinata said as she stumbled into the kitchen. She washed
her face with cold water from the sink, Her heart was beatign faster than it ever
had before.

Dinner went great, Hinata was able to talk to Naruto without fainting. When dinner was finished Naruto helped her wash up. she told him he was a guest and he didn't have to but he insisted.
Once they had finished the washing up they went outside for some fresh air.
Naruto yawned as he streched his arms in the air, "That food was the best Hinata,
you are a really good cook."
"Thank you," Hinata blushed.
"Wow! you can see the moon so close here," Naruto said.
"You can see it better from the roof," Hinata twiddled her fingers together, she
hadn't done that for awhile, "do you want to go up?"
"sure, that would be cool,"Naruto smiled.

They sat on the roof top. Hinata had her legs close to her chest while Naruto had
his hands spread out behind him. Hinata glanced at his blue eyes glistening in the moon
light. She couldn't move her eyes away from them even when he turned to look at her.
They stared into eachothers eyes from along time before Hinata came back to Earth.
she turned away in embarrassment.
"Hinata," Naruto said in a smooth voice.She turned back to look at him.
He put his hand up to her cheek and brushed her skin,
"Your eyes are so beautiful."
"N-Naru.."
But before she could finish he leaned into and kissed her, it was only a soft kiss.
Naruto pulled away and for the first time ever he really looked at her. He looked right
into her and as if he had read her mind he kissed her again but harder.
He put one hand on her lower waist and the other through her hair. She responded by putting
one hand on his leg and the other lightly on his chest. As they deepened the kiss Naruto groaned
alittle. When he relised she needed to breathe he pulled away, tears were coming from her eyes.
"Hinata, did i do something wrong?" Naruto said sounding worried.
"N-no," Hinata said looking down, "It's just that i have always watched you and tonight was the first time you have really looked at me."
Naruto smiled kindly and placed a hand under her chin so that she was looking at him.
He put his forhead on hers and looked into her eyes, "I'll never stop looking at you."
And with that he took her in his arms and hugged her tightly.
I did this today but i typed it really quick so it might have some mistakes.

this is my first Naruto x Hinata and i really like it so i hope you like it 2 :)

i do not own the characters they belong to Masashi Kishimoto.
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